8/13/10

Summer

Summer is almost over and school is starting. It's time to get this blog going!
I know most of you have not had much time to contribute to this blog, but now that your re-gaining you writing skills in school...


WE HAVE A CHALLENGE

 We want you to write a "DIAMANTE"  poem (listed below) about your Summer. I myself will write a poem (hopefully the other blog authors will too).

No prize, but your poem is on the Cloud Company.

A Diamante is a seven-lined contrast poem set up in a diamond shape. The first line begins with a noun/subject, and second line contains two adjectives that describe the beginning noun. The third line contains three words ending in -ing relating to the noun/subject. The forth line contains two words that describe the noun/subject and two that describe the closing synonym/antonym. If using an antonym for the ending, this is where the shift should occur. In the fifth line are three more -ing words describing the ending antonym/synonym, and the sixth are two more adjectives describing the ending antonym/synonym. The last line ends with the first noun's antonym or synonym.To make it a bit simpler, here is a diagram.
Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subect
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subect
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subect, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject



Now, get busy writing and send it in to me.  Include a favorite photo of your summer if you can.  You'll be published here on THE CLOUD CO. blog as soon as you send it!

If you liked doing this, here are some more types of poetry to work on!

3 comments:

  1. come on Computer Girl! i know at least you can do it!

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  2. Here is our Daimante Poem

    Sydney
    Sweet, dog
    Walking, retreating, bleeding
    Scared, hurt, mean, vicious
    Charging, biting, hurting,
    Mean, dog
    Buck

    I realize "dog" is also a noun, but it was used to described both Sydney and Buck. Hope we pass the test!!!

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